This is a piece of writing I wrote! I think I did a good job and I love this story and I wish I could have that chocolate the girls found! It took me awhile to think of what to do for this story and I kept pausing and thinking and deleting stuff! but then I thought of this and I loved it!
What would your story be called but it would have to relate to chocolate?
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