The City Gets Crazy
“Ughhhh.. That villain last night took AGES to beat..” Groaned Luminater (one of Pantherna’s sidekicks) while sitting on the COMFIEST chair in the spaceship. “Uhhh yeah” Said Huminater passing back and forth, “Oh my gosh guys, literally all we had to do was steal the wand, knock the villain out and then the secret superhero crew police came and took her to villain jail, IT WAS SO EASY!!” Pantherna replied driving the spaceship, “but we missed HIGH SCHOOL MUSICAL 2!!” The 2 sidekicks said together. “It was only on tonight,” Said Huminater, “ughh” Pantherna said, you could tell she was starting to get annoyed with her sidekicks that she got put with. A little while later, when Pantherna and her sidekicks were finally nearly at mars once again.. Pantherna got an alert/video call from her boss (The Mask who she didn't even know the true identity of) She answered the facetime call, “Hello Pantherna, Luminater and Huminater. We have been watching the cities on earth, and it looks like in Auckland City there is a villain, she is a lady, blue spiked up hair, blue scaly mask with a blue scaly costume as well. We need you and your sidekicks to stop this villain from taking over the city.” The Mask said to the crew, “but we are SO close to home, can’t you get someone else to do it??” Pantherna replied to her boss, “No because you are the strongest superhero and we think your super speed power plus your other ones will be great to defeat this villain.” The Mask replied to Pantherna, while Pantherna was on the call with The Mask, Luminater and Huminater were getting ready and tightening their costumes practicing what they were gonna do and blah blah blah blah. Once they got back to Earth and were above Auckland City, they all flew down to the ground landing with one hand on the ground and one knee up. “ALRIGHT, ALL WE HAVE TO DO IS PULL THE SNAKE FROM THE BACK OF HER SUIT AND THEN SHE SHOULD FALL TO THE GROUND AND GET AUTOMATICALLY KNOCKED OUT!!” Pantherna shouted over all the crashing and screaming. “OK” The sidekicks shouted. Luminater and Huminater’s first job in every villain crisis is to take all the people to a safe place. They scoop everyone up and carry them to safety (while flying OBVIOUSLY.) While they are doing that Pantherna lifts up all the boulders from buildings and throws them away with her power, she doesn't even have to touch them! It's a really cool power. Once she has a clear space she starts to fight the villain with her laser eyes that are yellow with black spots on them since she's based on a leopard, the villain fights back with its flying fangs power. Luminater and Huminater have taken all the people to safe places now so they are flying to the top of a building which the villain is standing under. They don’t usually do this but they can all sense that this is gonna be a hard one. Luminater and Huminater came down super fast but they made too much noise and the villain slithered away EXTREMELY fast. WOAH they had NEVER seen that before. They saw the villain slither into the ancient Museum that was NEVER there before, they followed the villain in and WOW there were so many stained glass creations! OH NO they all noticed that Luminater and Huminater hid ALL THE PEOPLE in here!!!!!!!! But when they spotted the villain again she was just slithering past everyone. Hmmm this was REALLY weird, what is she up to.. Luminater and Huminater started grabbing all the people again to take them to a new hiding spot just in case, and Pantherna followed the Snake villain into the stained glass room.. Luminater and Huminater just decided to hide the people OUTSIDE the stained glass room… This was going to be bad. Then the Snake villain started to squiggle through the stained glass maze and Pantherna RAN through all the stained glass pieces trying to catch the snake villain. They were both using their super speed power but while they were breaking all the stained glass windows all the glass fell OUTSIDE where MOST of the people were because some just left without Luminater or Huminater. All the glass fell all around the people. Huminater and Luminater started to take everyone away. Suddenly the villain changed to normal person form but she must have forgotten she cant use her super speed power when she is her normal villain self, so Pantherna quickly grabbed the snake off her suit and the villain fell to the ground and knocked out automatically like they were told. Then Pantherna fixed up all the buildings but then soon realised that there was a trail of glass that had a bit of red on each piece.. UH OH, Luminater and Huminater finally got everyone that got hurt to the hospital but they soon found out that no one survived sadly… A couple days later the Police were looking for evidence about the stained glass incident. Pantherna was still around and she saw evidence from the Snake villain and took it to her lair because she said, “We need this more than they do…” THE END!
Hi Neave
ReplyDeleteWow, what can I say, an excellent narrative you have written!
I love the use of speech marks when characters were speaking and the great impact you had with your language choices.
Keep it up!
Miss Hudson